You can read the poem "The Scab Man" here: http://www.reddit.com/r/shortscarystories/comments/13sgrh/the_scabman_poem/
Whilst working on my larger comic I decided to do something smaller using traditional media.
Sticking with the theme of dark storytelling I chose the poem The Scab-Man by IPostAtMidnight.
I started with some simple character designs:
For the victims I imagined a teenage girl and a young boy. I originally drew full pyjamas for the girl, then realised it would flow better if she were wearing lighter clothes as the Scab Man looks for Scabs on bare skin. I haven't decided what colour schemes to use for them at this point but I'm considering pink pj's for the girl, blue for the boy, the girl maybe red haired and the boy darker in complexion. I considered having them brother and sister but I felt it would be easier to work with if it were two separate people in separate scenes, so I want their colouring to help define them as separate.
For the Scab Man I thought it would be nice to have some input from the author of the poem on his design. After the first sketch, I thought the face was a little too chubby to be scary so I sketched an alternative head with some of the features switched around on a thinner facial structure. I sent these sketches to IPostAtMidnight and asked if they were similar to how they imagined the character when they wrote the poem.
Their response was: "Love it! Especially the popped out eyeball! He's got a very orc/goblin/bloodthirsty-Grinch feel to him. Even if you think the first one was too cute, I think that's kind of cool... mixing a bit of cute with a lot of grisly can make things so twisted. But I do like the second head, too. The strips hanging across the mouth/cheek are an excellent touch. And don't worry about how I imagined him, I'd much rather see what you saw in your head."
It was very nice to get feedback from the author and I decided to keep the first design, but switch some of the facial features a little.
Thank you to IPostAtMidnight for letting me use their work to draw from.